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1. rule 3: too vague when discussing the negative connotation http://amandaprindle.blogspot.com/
2. rule 8: punctuation goes inside quotation marks: "towering volumes of marble and glass",             http://runskunkrun.blogspot.com/
3. rule 6: avoid the verbs "use" and "shows." uses very low and denotative words http://vikingdeathmetal.blogspot.com/
4.  rule 3: too vague  http://xchoosier3366.blogspot.com/